Question

help me to find out the mistakes in this artice

Answer 1

1 were broken

2 去掉for

3 对的

4 experience

5 对的

6 which改成that

7 对

8 去掉more

9 i改成me

10 去掉the

11 do 加个it

12 maybe i express my mind with some grammer mistakes

13 it is because my low level..thanks for your translation..!