To the president of United States:
Mr Bush,I appreciate your concern,as the president of US,for the safety of many Iraqi citizens,who are potentially under the threat of terrorism.However,as a high school student in China who is greatly concerned about this international controversy,me,like many other citizens of my country,believe that for the sake of peace,military force should not be involved in fighting terrorism.It is common knowledge that although your military force might be able to wipe out terrorism,it would do nothing to benefit the citizens of Iraq.Rather,as history proves,the war is likely to create more deaths and injuries for the country.Hence,for the peace and safety of the its citizens,please do not do not send your troops to Iraq and start the war.
Yours Sincerely
XXX
这个偶写得比较正经一点,因为是给美国总统的,希望适用吧.如果采用了,请问楼主可不可以告诉老师的评语,很想知道的说.麻烦了