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What do I want to do when I’m older?Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because he or she is good at sports.Someone wants to be a writer and make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because he or she likes teaching children.
I like singing and I am good at it.So I want to become a singer.Singing is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Singing can make you like music.A lot of musicians love singing.
I began to practise singing when I was ten years old.Now I’m in grand five.I hope when I’m sixteen years old ,I can become grand eight.I’ll be harder and harder to practise.
To become a singer is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.
当我长大以后,我会想要做什么?有的人想要做一名医生；有的人因为自己擅长运动,就想要成为一个篮球运动员；有的人想要当一位作家和写作；有的人因为喜欢教小朋友,所以想要做一个老师.
我喜欢唱歌并且唱得不错,所以,我想要成为一名歌唱家.唱歌是一件乐事,而且你可以（从中）学习到一些音乐方面的知识.歌唱可以令一个人爱上音乐,有很多很多的音乐家都喜欢唱歌.
我刚开始练习唱歌是在我10岁的时候,而现在我已经考上（声乐）5级了.我希望在自己16岁的时候可以考上（声乐）8级.我将会更加倍努力地练习下去.
想要成为一名歌唱家可一点都不容易.但是我相信,我一定可以做得到.
希望可以帮到你哦!