Write your epigraph with your life while you can (strive for a brilliant one).
Engrave your own epigraph with your life while you are able to ( make great things happen).
Use your life as a graver to write the best epigraph while you can (make a great one).
第一和第三句中的“one”都是指代epigraph
没有逐字翻译,基本上是英文怎么顺畅怎么写的
另:括号里的可要可不要