现在越来越多的学生骑电动车(motor bicycle)上学,请结合所给内容谈谈自己的看法。

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  • Nowadays, more and more students go to school by motor bicycle. There are many advantages of riding a motor bicycle, for example, it is convenient and saves time. However, a motor bicycle costs much more than a bike. Besides, some students always ride too fast and sometimes they do not ride on the cycleway, which leads to many accidents.

    In my opinion, we’ better walk or cycle to school. Compared with riding a motor bicycle, it will help to save more money and make us safer. By doing so, we can take regular exercise, which will keep us fit. Besides, it will be kinder to the environment.

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