Question

看看这句话语法对不,second,work out rules that some one who violates i

Answer 1

1 some one 不如 anyone,规则不能只惩罚一些人,而是任何违反规则的人.

2 既然是rules,后面应该用them

3 that从句用的不恰当,so that 更合适.work out some rules so that anyone who violates them should be punished.

4 如果你想用定语从句的话：work out rules that will punish anyone who violates them