楼上的：
请不要来乱评论别人写的作文
我为什么不能用 two different views?
比起只讨论一方面,我选择讨论两种观点.
还有,Issue 这个词,可以用来指很多事情.
没有谁规定只能指很大的观点.
Of 后面,也可以跟 Mobile phones
The issue of sthing
The issue of using mobile phones
The issue of mobile phones
本来就是在讨论和手机有关的事情.
又不一定要用 of using mobile phones in our school.
至于你说的“后面错的更离谱”
请你指出来,我后面哪里错了.
谢谢.
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The view of using mobile phone in our school
There are two different views on the issue of mobile phones in schools. Some believe that students should be able to use mobile phones in school because there are many advantages to doing so. For one thing, if an emergency were to occur at the school, the students would immediately be able to use their mobile phones to reach their parents and relatives. Also, if a student's parents wanted to reach the student, they can send a text message to the student as opposed to having to call the office and then getting transferred. However, there are also some who believe otherwise. If someone called in during a lesson, the ringing of the mobile phone would clearly disrupt the class, and students might be more tempted to send text message during class. Furthermore, students might use the mobile phones to cheat on exams, and this would cause many controversies. Overall, the advantages are balanced with the disadvantages, and it is ultimately the school's decision whether or not to allow mobile phones.
171个字.自己写的.
不知道这是不是你想要的?
如果太长的话,我可以改短.