Hello, everyone,
My name is Li Hua. For your convenience, I would like to tell you something about the facilities in and around our school.
In our school there is a gym and a badminton hall, where you can play several ball games. North of the school you can easily find some restaurants, a post office and banks, all of which are within ten minutes’ walk. We are also close to a big supermarket—LOTTEMART. You can buy what you need any time, for it’s open 24 hours a day. If you need to go to the hospital, the No. 1 bus will take you there —just two stops from our school. Alternatively, you can dial 120 in emergencies.
Wish you a happy stay here. If you have further questions, you can turn to me.
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