求改正语法错误According to this

求改正语法错误According to this sentence,I can see how a good boy t

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只能在原有的基础上稍加修改：From this sentence,I can see how a good boy that Junior is.I really admire him because he has a pure heart,which makes him save money for poor people.As he says,"...made me feel pretty good about myself”,I think that's enough.Certainly,it is a perfect moment when a man really loves a woman,and he'll do anything for her.I believe he is not only to do it for the girl,also for himself,for helping other people must make him happy.That reminds me of a question,"to the end,what changed us to be a good person?" Nowadays,more and more people cover his/her eyes by money,and become selfish.Even though they have huge property,one doller could be their whole world.As we grow up,we lose the pure heart that Junior has.