My name is Wu Nan,I this year fifteen years old,I am a outgo

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    My name is Wu Nan, fifteen years old now. I am an outgoing girl, I love sports.I like making friends, but I don't have many friends so far. At school, I like studying language, cause it's interest to me. My father is a driver, he works very hard, and he likes drinking during his spare time, the good thing is he doesn't smoke. My mother is a very gentle woman, she's always being kind to me. And this is my lovely family and me.