eat two apples everydayeveryday 应该是分开写的.I'm going to run at 20 minute every morning and going for a walk at 15 minute every evening.
run at 20 minute不用写AT,因为这不是在一个准确的时间,所以不用AT.minute要写复数.going for a walk at 15 minute
同上.以及前文用了be going to do sth.的将来时时态,后面的go for a walk也应该用原型.watch a few TVwatch tv some time.就可以了把.后面的都对的.PS.错误的都像直译的.告诫阿,用翻译工具写作文是大大的恐怖的.