Question

这句英文有错吗?while the most of children like snow but the most of

Answer 1

两处错

while 引导让步句时不可以和but 连用,所以,应该说：

Most children like snow ,but most adults hate it

或者：

While most children like snow ,most adults hate it

the most of children（adults) 要改为most children,（adults) 或者most of the children（adults)