1.题目中,A小写为a
2第一行:.are going to have
3.第二行改为:But there are also ..
4.第二段第一句,I prefer to
5.第二段第一句最后,Than 最好改为 The second,因为前面刚写到first of all 第一点
6.最后一句,改成 if we work hard
1.题目中,A小写为a
2第一行:.are going to have
3.第二行改为:But there are also ..
4.第二段第一句,I prefer to
5.第二段第一句最后,Than 最好改为 The second,因为前面刚写到first of all 第一点
6.最后一句,改成 if we work hard