Germany 2. play the violin 3 impressed 4.Having known 5.and 改为 but 6.that 改为 it 7. for his audience-- with his audience 8.there -- where 9.As he grew older 10. becomes -- became 11. her -- his
童鞋,你在打字的时候可能有大小写字母,标点符号等的错误,这样就影响了我的判断,居然找出了11个错误.你重点检查一下 capital后面是否逗号,如果是逗号,there需要改为where.还有 play the violin 乐器前要加the.