谁帮我做下这个短文改错One day the sun was very strong,Jim was so tired

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  • 不是十行吗?怎么变成十一行了?

    1.so → too

    too和后面的to构成too...to...结构,意思是“太...而不能...”

    2.was → were

    后面的trees是复数,所以谓语动词也用复数形式

    3.took和his中间加入off

    固定短语take off,意思是“脱下...”

    4.fall → fell

    and后面的fall是并列谓语,所以和took/lay一样用过去式fell

    5.very → so

    和后面的that构成so...that...结构,意思是“如此...以至于...”

    6.while → when

    此处when为并列连词,意思是“就在这时”= and then,引导并列句,而不是时间状语从句

    7.up → down

    “蛇在脚边”,当然是look down“向下看”,而不是look up“向上看”

    8.frightening → frightened

    frightening意思是“令人害怕/恐惧的”,frightened意思是“感到害怕/恐惧的”

    9.正确

    10.去掉was

    disappear是不及物动词,没有被动语态,所以它直接做谓语,不能再在其前加上be动词was

    11.正确