1.would you please not to make any noise in the room?
改为 would you please not make any noise in the room?
因为这是一固定句型would you please (not) do sth?
2.please tell him don't to be late for school
改为please tell him not to be late for school.
因为tell sb not to do sth是动词固定用法.用不定式做宾补.而don't是助动词的否定式,只做谓语不做其它成份
3.jack was made stay behind by his teacher after school yesterday
改为 Jack was made to stay behind by his teacher after school yesterday.
因为使役动词这被动语态不定式带 to .而主动语态中的不定式不带 to
4.who teaches your maths this term?Miss Chen does
改为who teaches you maths this term?
因为teach后要接双宾语.即sb sth,间宾的是人称代词不能是物主代词.
5.the runner seemed to be very tired after he finished doing the work
这句没有错误.我想原句是这样的 the runner seemed to very tired.改为the runner seemed to be very tired.因为seem后接不定式.