第2段第2行"I had to face the fact that had been happened"改成"I had to face the fact what had been happened";
第2段第3行" I had got the chance but I had not done it and I did not knew how to did it"中最后一个"it"指代不明;
第2段最后一行"I acted as if I was fool,for I mey be just a "fool".
"整句最好改一改.