尽管大家都帮你把句子改正了过来,但是这毕竟不是长久的办法——以后再写作文怎么办?当老师的我给你几点写作方面的小建议:1.写作不是翻译,不宜逐字逐句地翻译.你的短文完全就是一篇翻译,这是写作的大忌.其实,在写作文的时候,我们只需要把汉语里的那个意思用英语表达出来就行了.打个比方说,你的这个句子“我觉得你是一个可爱的,害羞的男孩”,其实我们有很多方式可以表达出相同的意思:a.You are a lovely boy,but I you are too shy.b.How lovely you are,but don't be shy,OK?3.Why you are so shy?You are lovely.4.Hei,lovely boy,why don't you believe yourself?You needn't be so shy.等等等等.2.积累单词、词组和句型并且熟练运用.当我们要表达什么事情的时候,其实我们都有特定的短语和句型来往上套的.比方说你的第三个句子“你像个洋娃娃”,像什么的短语是look like,be like,当然如果你要是不知道,那你也可以想想其他的表达方式,比方说,you are as beautiful as a doll.或者说“Why you dress like a doll?" .从你的作文来看,句型和短语你积累的太少了.3.适当地加上一些连接和过渡的句子或单词,如and,but,so,however.这一点你在你的作文里做的很好了.快乐学好英语.
帮我看看这几句英语有错吗?Nice to meet you,Sam!I think you are a lovely a
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