1.Except this--Besides
2.It also can improve one person's mood--It can also improve one's mood.
3.listened--listened to,“年轻人”不是younger,而是“the young”
此外,pop music前不用冠词the,p也不必大写,music不能加s.
A篇作文语病较多,这是三分差距的主要体现.
1.Except this--Besides
2.It also can improve one person's mood--It can also improve one's mood.
3.listened--listened to,“年轻人”不是younger,而是“the young”
此外,pop music前不用冠词the,p也不必大写,music不能加s.
A篇作文语病较多,这是三分差距的主要体现.