帮我改一下,急Dear my host family,My English name is Peter,I am 15y

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  • My English name is Peter,I am 15years old now.I live in Chengdu Sichuan province.I (like) playing table tennis to (and) basketball.( But I am not strong enough to play them).(So playing) computer games is also one of my hobbies.There are there (family members at my home),my mom ,my (dad) and me.My mother is (an accounting) manager.My father is a financial manager.(I want to join) the summer camp (because) I want to improve my spoken English.I also want to communicate with the native speakers.I (shall treat) my host family as my friends.And I am looking (forward) to (have a) picnic with you.Still,I hope you can take me to visit someplaces ( which are) meaningful .I think taking part in this activity will let both of us learn the customs from our countries .Also,it will make me have a chance to study in a developed country.I will treasure this chance ( heartily).