我的修改（英语专业毕业生):
Summer vacation will COME to an end immediately AND this is the last ONE in my life,SO IT IS also the most miraculous.SUMMER VACATIONS BEFORE have never been THAT meaningful AS this one.THANKS TO THE OLYMPICS,OR IT WOUDN'T HAVE BEEN THAT LONG.Of course,I would also like to thank for everyone THAT AROUND ME.
EVERY time LEAVING the weather always becomeS cool AND IT SEEMS LIKES SEEING my off.WILL my future have such a holiday AGAIN?SO YOUNG,such irritableNESS and depressION,SO MUCH joy and tears,SO happy and PLEASING.MAYBE I recall this busy and miraculous time AND it will be profoundly remembered AFTER SOME YEARS.
Anyway,my holiday will END soon,goodbye,my friends,good-bye,my Last Summer Vacation.