写的挺好的,评分的话不好说,但以现在托福的标准的话,应该不错吧,不过建议你不用刻意写长句,比如the students should consider the question about whether they really need the technology as their helper discreetly before they take action so that they can utilize the technology most efficiently while the technology itself will not jeopardize them.这句话意思就不大清楚
托福作文一篇,Technology,students' helper or not?Nowadays,the advan
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