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  • A glance at the two graphs provided reveals some information about

    the effect of treatment in two types of cancer,namely Alimentary tract

    cancer and Lymphosarcoma,in females.

    When it comes to

    Alimentary tract cancer,It is noteworthy that women who received the

    treatment maintain a higher level of survival rate than others.

    Decreasing steadily in the first three years,this rate then stays at

    somewhere near 48 per cent.Meanwhile,cases without treatment have a

    lower survival rate--drop dramatically in the first year,before sliding marginally

    to approximately 18 per cent in next four years.

    With regard to

    Lymphosareoma,it can be easily found out that treatment make no

    difference in the first two years,but in the following years,women who

    did not receive the treatment keep a 25 per cent survival rate while

    their counterparts are still dying,with no one survived in the end of

    the fifth year.

    To conclude,this treatment is

    effective on treating Alimentary tract cancer and is useless,even

    harmful,on treating Lymphosareoma.

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