Every who ----------Everyone seeing her all love her
She have a grandpa?谁没有外公?
She has a grandpa suffering with Alzheimer's disease.她有一个患有阿尔茨海默病的外公.
but she love he and care he every day-------------he改为him（作宾语）love等动词注意三单
care 改成 look after 较好
另外Her hair is golden,and she has blue eyes能用上with结构更好
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