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Everyone has a dream,a dream to become a scientist,or a rich.These dreams seem great.While my dream may be tiny compared with theirˊs.My dream is very simple.That is,in my professional carear I will made some achievements.When i was young ,i wanted to be a scientist,but with time went by,i wanted very much to become a master of high-tech.so,i choose remote sensing.In my impression ,it is a technology based on all the science and technology.I have a dream that one day,my achievement in this aspect to be applied in military.In addtion,I want to be a soldier,too.I image that ten years later,my friends and i can still be together.Talk about our youth dream.I think my like is very simple.Not to live for living,but to live for myself and friends family and dream.