高中短文改错以下有短文9处错误,请指出并改错.I was only about six that he held his

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  • I was only about six that(when) he held his hand out to me.I took it in me(去掉) and we walked.Then I asked her(him,是打错了吧),“Grandpa,how come you have so many lines on your hand?”he laughes(laughted) and said,“Well,that's a big question!”He was silent for a moment.So(Then) he answered slowly:“Each these lines stands for a trouble in my life.”I looked at his other hands(hand).“But Grandpa,what(why) do you have more lines on that one?”“Because there are more the(去掉) honors and joys in my life.”

    只能找到这里个,如果硬要再找的话honor和joy应该不可数,所以不能加s,但是我不太确定