自己写的~水平还行
My home town
My home town is a beautiful place.It stands becide a wide river and is pretty rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town.Many people had no work.They lived a hard life.But in 1995 my home town was liberated.Since then great changes have taken place there.The streets have been widened.Factories,schools,hospitals,cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another.The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my home town.All the more I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.