第一段的错误是：instead of wasting time to learn music and sports.
第二段：we should study more professional knowledge than others. I agree with this viewpoint of canceling music course.
总的来说很chinglish
而且这个观点好无语啊.好功利啊
看下下面两个英语句子写的对不对 有没有语法的毛病 错了帮忙改正
第一段的错误是：instead of wasting time to learn music and sports.
第二段：we should study more professional knowledge than others. I agree with this viewpoint of canceling music course.
总的来说很chinglish
而且这个观点好无语啊.好功利啊