我觉得可以这样改:I admire Lin Qiaozhi very much ,who became a specialist in women's illnesses .用非限制性定语从句.
其实加在in women's illnesses 后面,也是对的.
我觉得可以这样改:I admire Lin Qiaozhi very much ,who became a specialist in women's illnesses .用非限制性定语从句.
其实加在in women's illnesses 后面,也是对的.