my dream is going to be a abroad student.because i can take enjoyment in foreign scenery and learn a lot of new knowledge.
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I dream of being a abroad student(不提倡采用ABROAD STUDENT) because I can enjoy（还是用简单的好）foreigh sceneries and---（后面对）
i'll learned english well to make i going to be a abroad student when i grow up.
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我相信你也看出来了,没有说WILL LEARNED的～!
I'll work hard on English(OR WORKING hard) to make me a good student when I grow up.