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Learn to Control Feelings
Nobody can be happy all the time. If something bad happens to you, what will you do? Will you get angry?
I think at that time you should control your feelings. Controlling feelings is important to us all. If we control our feelings well, we can find what caused the problem and then we can find better ways to solve the problem. Also controlling feelings can help us to make friends with more people. Bad feelings can make you lose friends and cause you some trouble. So we should learn to control our feelings and make our life happier.
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般现在时态及情态动词的表达方式。联系实际，例举控制情绪的好处，建议人们学会控制自己的感情。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些过渡词，and then，also，So为文章增色不少。写作时就可以适当运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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