Dear Mary:
Hi,thank you so much for inviting me to attend such a wonderful trip around Shanghai.I would like to sincerely thank you for all the great experiences we’ve created through our trip together,with you as the best tour guide ever!We were able to visit many places that I’ve never been to; I had a very enjoyable time visiting the tourist attractions.
As you may know,I am a student who is currently trying to master English writing,but I do not quite understand how I am able to grasp writing techniques.I am wondering would you be interested in giving me some advice on how to improve my English writing skills.Please let me know,that would be very helpful!If you ever have free time,it would be my pleasure to invite you as my guest to come over to my house and have a formal meal with my family.Once again,I would like to thank you for the wonderful time!
With regards,
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