看看这篇英语作文有什么错误!This park has many year history.The park on th

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  • This park has (a long) history.The park (is) on the main street.(This) park has a lake.The lake is very beautiful.The water is very clean.There are all kinds of fish in the lake.You can go boating and fishing (in the park).(You can also go for a picnic there).(I) wish (that) everyone will have a good time.

    因为go boating/fishing和go for a picnic结构不一样 所以我帮你分开写了.别的基本没什么问题.