取钱drew --draw
sound 改为noise更好
at one push改为 in a hurry
It said that 改为 It's said that
coming---came
standed--stand,这里按照照片中的时态,不必用过去时,而且过去时也应该是stood
取钱drew --draw
sound 改为noise更好
at one push改为 in a hurry
It said that 改为 It's said that
coming---came
standed--stand,这里按照照片中的时态,不必用过去时,而且过去时也应该是stood