有几句话没怎么看没明白,就根据我的理解来试着帮你该一下吧!
就我看来,这是你写给你偶像的一封信吧,那格式需要改.
Dear 名（如Mike）,
My name is KaKa,who is one year older than you.I love you very much for I think you are a very lovely boy.There are many things about you in my house,glasses,bracelet and so on.I also collect some things you like in my bedroom.When surfing on the internet,I always look for all the news about you.Although my English is not good enough to express my feelings freely now,I will do the best of my ability to learn English,because you are my greatest motivation!
The Christmas Day is coming,and I hope you will have a happy new year.
At last,I want to say,"you are the best in the world,and I will support you forever!"
Yours,
KaKa