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Hello,We are a professional manufacturer of hookah bottles.More than 60% of China hookah retailers use our bottles.We are very interested to cooperate with your company.Please give me your e-mail address so that I can send you the price list of our products.We will give you our best quote.
也顺便帮你调整了个别词汇,象work with改成cooperate,通顺些也更符合商业上英语的习惯.
祝业务顺利!