楼主有才.只建议把最后的那个2个
1) that is harmful to you,改成
...communication,which is harmful to you.甚至which is harmful 就可以了.
2) 不要用But起句,换成 However,I think.
楼主有才.只建议把最后的那个2个
1) that is harmful to you,改成
...communication,which is harmful to you.甚至which is harmful 就可以了.
2) 不要用But起句,换成 However,I think.