1.A day about改成A day of,student改成students
2.it is different from much改成it is much different from
3. When they come to school把come to改成arrive at更符合语境.
4.hand their homework,把hand 改成hand in,表传递上来的意思.
5.rang改成ring,rang是ring的过去式.
6.listening 改成listen to,和and前面的动词形式一样.
7.In morning中间加the.
8.Math改成maths,无须大写,后面加s
9.so on改成and so on.固定词组.
10This is a day about Chinese student.改成This is a day of Chinese students.