when I was in high school .most of my 【friends】 had bicycles i hoped i could also have 【one】 one day i saw a secondhand bicycle ,【which】 was only one hundred yuan .i 【asked】 my father 【for some】 money,but he said he only 【gave】me half of the money,【I】should find the other harf myself,so i went to sell 【newspapers】 after 【去掉the】 school.My father was pleased 【when】i showed him the money a month 【later】 he 【gave】 me 【fifty Yuan】 ,you can 【imagine】 【how】 [去掉much]happy i was when i rode to school on my 【new】 bicycle
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