I made my way out there
breathing in great (and) deep draughts
while walking slowly about,(and) still wearing my white cook's hat
我信步走去,一边深深呼吸着空气,一边慢慢地踱着步,头上仍戴着那顶白色的厨师帽.
句子用了很多表示伴随的短句,都是主谓同时省略的,用ing形式表示伴随.
我改下给你看看:
I walked out,and I was breathing in great,deep draughts,at that time,I was walking slowly about,and I was still wearing my white cook's hat.
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