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In the last seven years,China`s real estate 【industry has】 【seen faster growth】 than ever before.Extremely 【high】 housing price 【has become】 unaffordable for those who want a decent and comfortable place to reside in the city but 【relies on salary as income】.To mitigate to this 【situation】,the government has carried out a series of measures to prevent housing price from increasing out of control,including 【raising】 interest rate,【invoking】 house property tax and so on.Now,these measures have scored preliminary results in some cities.