My changes（我的变化）
Do you want know how I've changed?OK!Let me tell you!
When I was a child,I used to be afraid of the darkness.For me,the darkness is very terrible .But now,I am not terrified of darkness,and I was terrified of spiders,which now I am still terrified of.Uh-huh.And my appearance changed a lot.When I was a child,I used to be short,but now I'm taller.I used to have long hair but now I have short hair...I'm so depressed when it comes to long hair(当听到长发我是如此的不爽) !I like long hair!As for learning,I used to like gym and art,but now I don't like gym any longer—it’s so tiring!
How I wish to be a child again!（我多么渴望再做一个孩子啊）
我已经全部修改好了,一切都好了.（我是高中英语教师,介词给学生批改书面表达）