Question

外语这句话有错吗?如何修改?In modern society full of keen competition and

Answer 1

好多错误啊..

一个一个来哦～

In modern society full of keen .

society后面要加it is

competition可以加s的

such as可以不用因为by已经有那个意义 并且后面列举的方面不需要动用such as

最后：children are of course no exception.

要改成in no exception

请楼主过目^_^