My summer vacation(假期)plan
In the summer holiday, I'm going to YangShuo with my parents. We are going there by bus for two days. I'm going to the Westen Street with my sister. I want to take some photos at the Westen Street, because it is so beautiful there !
你到底是5 天还是2天?
I will go to the park to fly a kite with my friends. At home, I will do my homework and help my mother do some housework.
该改的都改了,没有语病了. vacation 是假期的意思. 回到家后可以说：after I get(got) home 或者 After I home