I have been using the Internet since I was five years old.At that time,my mother seated me down in front of the computer and help me connect to the World Wild Web.Therefore,I havnt experienced the joy of online shopping until my sister finally told the idea to me.Last week,I ordered a Spanish textbook for summer course on line at only ten percent of the publishing price.I cannt tell how happy I was!I feel as if there is a larger space on my backyard,yet I had never walked into it!So I decide to buy more goods on line from now on.
好吧..10处错误,一条一条说
1.跟在完成时后面表示时间段要用since
2.five years old
3.my mother seated me down,不是was seated,不是妈妈被我,而是我被妈妈..
4.I havnt experienced不是I didnt
5.my sister finally told..to me不是tells
6.I ordered a used不是using,是被用过的
7.for (my) summer course.不可能是your summer course,讲不通
8.how happy I was
9.a larger space,没有larger store这么一说
10.I had never walked