1 were exerted influence on 模板吗?语法不对啊!
2 the cause of the youth has a passive attitude when they leave campus are mainifold 这明显意思不一致啊.
3 it is generally that 谁教的?
4 To illustrate,over the past ten years,due to the requirement for accounting is proliferated,an increasing number of students start to learn accounting no matter whether they love it.结果呢?怎么没有下文了呢?
5 Obviously,it exerts a negative influence on the quality of education.类似模板型的句子,一点都不实在?真的是显而易见的吗?这样的句子,放到哪里都能说,不具有充分的论述性.
6 Given the severity shortage above,we have no opinion but to take stringent measures to address this problem 这是地道的模板!与你真正的语言能力不符合,所以考官会不喜欢.
7 下面的就不看了,文章模板风格很重,很多百度里批作文的同学,模板风格都很重,是别人教的,还是自己学的呢?（期待你告诉我）.总之,作文是一种想法的表达,不是模板,词汇,句式的堆砌.而且你的作文论述性不强,即对于观点的解释性不强,不令人信服.你可能觉得很好,但就是走的模式化思路,没有意思.真的没有意思.
8 最多5.5,跟楼上一样,上不了6!