"Family album USA" is (an) (interesting),outstanding litte movie.
interesting首字母是元音字母,所以要用"an"；"interest"是动词,在这里变为形容词就要改变词性interesting(有趣的);
In （this） movie,Richarrd is a photographer.
最好用this,因为上面已提到这部电影；
He is （writing） a book.It's an (American) album.
拼写错误；
He has a very happy family.Robbie is his little brother.He （goes） to high school.
要么"He is going to..."要么"He goes to." 在这里用"goes"好一点；
Every class has a bad apple.Actually,Robbie gives teacher a big headache.
这句话没有错误,很好!
In the ACT 1,Richarrd （left） his bag on the ferry.
这里用一般过去式比较好.left就是leave的过去式.
Alexandra is a Greece girl.She (brought) it back to him.
同样,这里也该用过去式.brought是bring的过去式.顺便说下,在英语中,不存在第三人称主语直接加动词原型这种情况的.
The Richarrd's family (gave) thanks for (her).
同上,用过去式"gave"比较好；thanks for her吧,thanks for it的话,Alexandra就变成物了.
She (deserved) a pat on the back,she is a (smart) lady and very nice.
同上,用过去式；拼写错误.
另外Richarrd是不是应该改为Richard呢?