Since you can write,I reply in English.If you have trouble to understand,let me know.
Good job,I like your way to approach English.Unlike other people,instead of translating,you upload your article for revision is a very good way to improve your English.If you keep doing so,you English will become excellent.
Just few things keep in mind.
1.Please use Microsoft Word to write your paper,it will automatically correct a lot easy grammatical mistakes and misspelling for you.
2.Don’t try to directly translate Chinese into English; that makes some sentences very awkward.
Hello!Guys!(I am making speech again).Last time my topic was (“The Development of China”.) Today I would like to talk about my feeling about exams.
My first exam in the normal school was (Math).At the beginning,I thought it’s very (difficult) to achieve high (grade,because) we had the same exam papers with students who study science.To my surprise,we did better than them.And I achieved high marks (remarks?I don’t understand what you mean here) that pleased my parents.
This mid-term exam,I also have many thoughts.
It’s my first time that I don’t have enough time to finish the Chinese exam.(There) are more questions than I used to do.And there are some differences between this exam and (past ones).For example,there is a question about the (living place of an author.) And there is also a question (about title of an article which) few people pay attention to.
Math and History are easy.I have a lot of time to check them.
English!I cannot use words to express the difficulty of the exam.Recently,I have been (recited) a number of words.(Even though) it helps me a lot,but there are still lots of words and phrases that I can’t understand; (some of them I have never seen before.Even) though I can understand,the questions are too difficult to (complete).I （have） (watch phase) to think every question carefully.And I guess large amount of questions.From this examination I have learned a lot (learned a lot same as experience,redundant)!（ To accumulate my vocabulary over time,I should recite some words every day.I will have a large vocabulary!） I think it’s a good idea to improve English!