A
In 1983(时间状语)the popular writer(主语)who
published(定语从句) his forth novel, a science-fiction
thriller(这是逗号前面novel的同位语)that (后面是一个定语从句,做a science-fiction
thriller的定语)was to receive critical praise and achieve commercial
success.
根据上面分析,这个句子缺少了谓语,要将A的who去掉才是一个完整的句子