Question

求英语高手来指出作文中的错误Many student are inclined to talk with their p

Answer 1

1.Many students 复数

2.changable是可变化的意思,这里是换季的意思,最好写成changing

3.总之是in short

4.最后一段 Let's take more care of others.不该用for,take care of 固定搭配.

5.For a man who is worried,it is very important.for 表示因为不能放句首,改成As 更合适,worried about 是定的man,有宾语,所以要有about

基本就这么多,文章总体写的不错,加油!

spend with 是可以的,spend time on sb/sth只是其中一种用法